Monday, January 13, 2014

Interview with Shari Vester, author of Degrees of Courage

Author interviews are one of my favorite things to post which is why I am super excited to welcome author Shari Vester to Flashlight Commentary to discuss her debut release, Degrees of Courage

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Welcome to Flashlight Commentary Shari. To start things off, please tell us a bit about Degrees of Courage.
The book, a historical fiction, follows the story of a middle class Hungarian family through three generations, as their lives twisted and turned by the fateful events that shaped the history of their country during the first half of the 20th century.  The focus is on three women of the family, and the difficult challenges they must face, be it personal misfortunes, or problems beyond individual control. The first generation is represented by Angela, a naive eighteen-year-old girl, suddenly burdened by caring for her eight siblings after the untimely death of their mother.  Spiritual consolation offered by the parish priest turns into an illicit love affair, but he abandons her when she finds herself pregnant. Forced out of her home by an uncaring father, she raises her daughter alone, struggling together during the bitter years of World War One, even manages to overcome the loss of her right hand.

Her daughter, Ilonka, nicknamed Lensie, has a more promising future. In spite of suffering the stigma of her illegitimate birth in her childhood, she grows into a lovely young woman, happily married, raising her five children in the milieu of a well-contended middle class family, typical of Hungarian society in the 1930s. That changes with the outbreak of World War Two.  To learn about the troubles the family and the country faced during that period I leave to the reader.

The next generation living through the third tragic event in Hungary, the Communist takeover after WWII, is represented by Ilonka's younger daughter, Sari. Headstrong and exuberant, she is fiercely determined to get a higher education regardless of the limits set by the new government for those in the middle class to attend universities. She barely gets her diploma, when the country rose up in a bloody revolt in 1956 to free Hungary of Soviet domination.  The newly gained freedom lasted but a few days before Russian tanks rolled into Budapest, crushing all hopes for better days. Feeling trapped behind the Iron Curtain, Sari joins the 200,000 people who flees to the West, leaving all behind, including her family.

As the story concludes, she finds a new life and longed-for freedom in America, while her family continues to suffer the restrictions of Goulash Communism that brings a tragic end to her mother's life.

What inspired you to write this story?
It's two-fold. One is more personal, wanting to leave a legacy of the difficult and troublesome decades that changed so many lives among Hungarians.  Each of the three periods in the book started a wave of immigration, when thousands left the country to find their way to America, albeit for different reasons:  after WWI it was the depression, at the start and during WWII to escape the horrors, and in 1956 it was the decade long political oppression that sent people to seek freedom.  Members of the generation who lived during those dark times are slowly leaving us, and many expressed concern that with them the history of that era will also disappear.  Hopefully, the book will be there for grandchildren of these Hungarians as a reminder of what their grandparents endured.

The second reason for writing the book is broader.  It's not surprising that Hungary, a far away, small Central European country is not familiar to many among Americans.  Seniors might remember about Hungary's role in both World Wars that the country was allied with Germany, thus ended up on the losing side, or might recall reading the news about the 1956 revolution.  Goulash and Zsa Zsa Gabor probably sound more familiar to many. Those who traveled to Hungary most likely learned a bit about the history, and experienced the general friendliness of the people there, but I felt the need to shine a bit more light on a country that suffered so much especially through the last century, losing two third of its territory in 1920, enduring foreign occupation in 1944 and Soviet-style takeover afterwards, yet having the courage to fight for its right to exist.  

What research went into Degrees of Courage and did you discover anything particular while investigation the background material for your book?
Being born and raised in Hungary, I am familiar with the history of the country, and in many aspects the story is drawn on my own and my family's experiences.  I was still a child during WWII, but I remember well the shortages, the bombings, and the horrific actions of the Red Army, and of course, as an adult, I personally felt the oppressive power of the subsequent Communist system.  However, I made several trips to Hungary to research dates of historical events, names of prominent leaders, especially of the earlier times between 1914 and 1945. I brought back some books on the Trianon Peace Treaty of 1920, on the strategic plan of Communist takeover following Leninist-Stalinist directives, and read about the Communist International (Comintern for short), an organization (dissolved in 1943) to fight for the overthrow the international bourgeoisie and create an international Soviet Republic as a transition to the total abolition of the State.  I drew a suspicious look from the sales clerk when I bought both Hitler's Mine Kampf and Carl Marx's Capital. I made an interesting discovery by reading and comparing the theories of these two. Nazi ideology, especially in the early stages of development, was not far from that of Stalin's. Both were based on totalitarian principles, practiced eugenics with the creation of the "New Man" in mind, both committed atrocities utilizing mass violence, Hitler openly against racial and asocial elements of society, while Stalin targeted the "socially harmful" and kept it's modus operandi more or less behind closed doors.  But there is no room here to go into more details.

You probably have many, but is there one scene that you particularly enjoyed writing? 
Hands down, it is the part where Sari crosses the border in 1956 to join the exodus that took place after the failure of the revolution.  The scene where she says goodbye to her parents is painful, but the exhilarating feeling of freedom soon overtakes her sadness as she ducks under the wire fence that separates Hungary and Austria.  It is the moment when she realizes the drastic step she just took, leaving everything behind, yet at the same time she is certain that it was the right step, that it will lead her toward a better future.

What scene posed the greatest challenge for you as an author?
I had difficulty writing about the downward spiral Ilonka's life took after three of her children left the country in 1956.  She bore the difficulties the family suffered during the war with courage, and later hoped against hope that the Communist regime will be defeated, but when it tore her family apart, her recovery was truly challenged. In fact, she would never regain her strength and spirit.  The loss of her young two sons--one only 13-- and her daughter was devastating enough, but there was more to come. When her husband fell ill she had to assume the role of the breadwinner, but was denied a decent job and forced to work as a laborer in a foundry; then her son-in-law was jailed in 1957 for participating in the revolt and her eldest daughter and grandchildren were condemn to live in an abandoned shack on the outskirts of a village; the last straw was the threat of losing their home of 40 years. The stress brought on serious health problems, and when she finally lost her husband to cancer and is left to depend on others, she gave up. Imagining that scene, her state of mind, as she sat alone writing farewell letters to her children on the last day of her life, was hard to do. 

Sometimes fiction takes on a life of its own and forces the author to make sacrifices for the sake of the overall story.  Is there a character or concept you wish you could have spent more time with or expanded on?
I must stay, the opposite happened. I let the story take on a life of its own, all the way to the last of the 566 pages.  I know now that curtailing it here and there would have been smarter.  Quoting the book's review by Kirkus:  . . . "Needs pruning, but readers will admire the courage and initiative of these characters." According to another review, the sections on history read like a guidebook on Hungary. That however was intentional, since I wanted to raise awareness about the circumstances that shaped the country's destiny.
After finishing the book I considered dividing it into two separate books, but I just couldn't decide where to make the cut.  Alas, the book is not exactly an overnight read. 

Degrees of Courage is a multigenerational story. Did you find it difficult working with characters from such different backgrounds, decades, and social circumstances?
Only in case of Angela and the mood of the times she lived in.  It is heard to imagine today how difficult it was for a woman in the early 1900s to have a child outside of traditional marriage. In the still lingering Victorian era they were called "fallen women," stigmatized and shunned in the community, treated as second-class citizens and placed outside of the moral boundaries of society.  I had to use a lot of imagination writing about it, even though the time I was born some of this disgrace and shame still clung to unwed mothers. Still it was nothing compared to our present society where "single mothers" are respected, even admired for the difficult task of raising children without a father. 

Also, the country itself was different in Angela's lifetime from what it became after WWI. It was the partner state of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, its territory three times larger then after 1920, with rich natural resources and access to the Adriatic Sea. When I was born Hungary was but a truncated land locked country, left with nothing but a great grassy plane, a large lake and two major rivers, the punishment for fighting with Austria and Germany. 

If you could sit down and talk with one of the characters, maybe meet and discuss things over drinks, who would you choose and why?
No doubt it would again be Angela.  I think she was the strongest of the three main characters, and I could see sitting with her for hours, asking question after question.  One of course would be her involvement in a forbidden affair.  I understand her desperate state of mind after the death of her mother, when she faced the possibility to dedicate her life to caring for her siblings (age year and a half to 16), but still, how could she let it happen, after all she was brought up in a close-knit family according to the standard of morals of the time. 

But besides her personal problems, all result of that foolish entanglement, I would love to talk about the tremendous social changes she witnessed after WWI, at the dawn of women liberation. What a time it must have been to live when the roaring twenties kicked in, with young ladies shedding their ankle length dresses and slipping into flimsy shifts barely covering their knees, cutting their long hair into free swinging bobs, painting their faces and nails, going to nightclubs without a chaperone, dancing the Charlston to the new sound of jazz instead of waltzing to old fashion Strauss tunes, smoking and drinking, riding in fast running cars instead of horse drawn buggies, the list goes on, pushing the boundaries, including the right to vote, all in the name of independence. I think it was an era of wild emancipation for women, much more than we experienced during the 60s. Angela herself didn't follow the trend, but she would talk about her concern when her precious daughter jumped in to join the rest of the girls.

What do you hope readers come away with after reading your work?
As I mentioned previously, I hope readers will have a wider knowledge about this long suffering country, and a better understanding of its history, including the reasons of the unfortunate choices it made in the last century.  Today Hungary is free of oppression, upholding the principles of democracy, an overall lovely place to visit, especially Budapest, called the Paris of Eastern Europe.  Since the demise of Communism in 1990 they made a strong effort to correct the errors of that failed regime, never forgetting the damage done to the people during the prior 45 years.  I also hope that after reading the book, Americans might appreciate more the freedom they enjoy, and see how fragile that freedom is. The book demonstrates how easily people can be lulled into indifference by false promises and propaganda, while power slowly shifts to a centralized, unopposed government. And once that is achieved, the regime have the means to dictate, to silence, to pass laws that chip away civil liberties, all in the name of Democracy. In such state people must learn to watch what they say and do, which brings fear and suspicion into their lives.  The message to free society is to be vigilant in times of changes, hold their rights sacred, and guard their freedom, because once it's gone, it might require a great deal of courage and sacrifice to regain it.  

Finally, what is next for you?  Any new projects waiting in the wings?    
I am thinking of an entirely different subject to tackle in the future.  There are millions of Hungarian-Americans living in the US, some of them became well known, even famous in various fields, be it science, medicine, sports, films, music, or politics.  Perhaps it would be interesting to dig up information about these people, to find out how they or their ancestors came to this country, write about their contributions to America, or just reveal their identity in cases where hard-to-pronounce Hungarian names were changed to better conform to the English tongue. It would be fun to take on the task, and provide enjoyable reading for some of you.  (Hint: Paul Newman, Drew Barrymore, George Pataki) Should I do it?  Let me know what you think.

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About the Author: As a young woman, author Shari Vester fled her native Hungary in 1956 after the defeat of a patriotic uprising against the country’s Soviet-dictated regime. She was granted asylum in the United States to begin a new life. After a year living in New York she moved to Los Angeles, married, and worked as an insurance account manager. Recently retired, she and her husband relocated in the Palm Spring area, where she finally found time to write. Her debut novel, Degrees of Courage, is a historical fiction drawn on her family history. It paints a sharp contrast between life as we know it in America, versus a time and place where today’s “Let it be” mentality was simply impossible. For more information please visit Shari’s website. You can also follow her on Twitter.

About the Book: The book follows the story of three generation of women from 1900 through 1970, seven decades of wars and hardship. At the turn of the century, an era of strict moral codes, Angela falls in love with a priest who abandons her and her unborn child. She overcomes rejection and misfortunes, including losing her right hand, and brings up her daughter, exuberant, stubborn Ilonka. In spite of the stigma of her illegitimate birth, the girl finds happiness in love and marriage, raising five children, among them Sarika, independent and high-spirited, much like herself. With the outbreak of WWII, however, their lives change drastically, followed by equally hard times as the country falls under Soviet-style dictatorship. When an attempt to free the country in 1956 fails and people start to flee retributions, Sarika and her brothers join the exodus to the West. With her family torn apart Ilonka never recovers her strength. Years of fear and political pressures hasten her descend into depression, and when she loses her husband too, she finally gives up. Alone and completely on her own, Sarika finds her way to America, and begins a new life full of opportunities and most importantly, free of fear.

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Review at Bloggin’ ’bout Books
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Interview & Giveaway at Flashlight Commentary
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Guest Post & Giveaway at HF Connection
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Review at So Many Books, So Little Time
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Review at Closed the Cover
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Guest Post & Giveaway at Bibliophilic Book Blog
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Review at Just One More Chapter
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Review at Silver’s Reviews
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Degrees of Courage by Shari Vester

Rating: ★ ★ ★ ☆ ☆
Read: January 3, 2014

The book follows the story of three generation of women from 1900 through 1970, seven decades of wars and hardship. At the turn of the century, an era of strict moral codes, Angela falls in love with a priest who abandons her and her unborn child. She overcomes rejection and misfortunes, including losing her right hand, and brings up her daughter, exuberant, stubborn Ilonka. In spite of the stigma of her illegitimate birth, the girl finds happiness in love and marriage, raising five children, among them Sarika, independent and high-spirited, much like herself. With the outbreak of WWII, however, their lives change drastically, followed by equally hard times as the country falls under Soviet-style dictatorship. When an attempt to free the country in 1956 fails and people start to flee retributions, Sarika and her brothers join the exodus to the West. With her family torn apart Ilonka never recovers her strength. Years of fear and political pressures hasten her descend into depression, and when she loses her husband too, she finally gives up. Alone and completely on her own, Sarika finds her way to America, and begins a new life full of opportunities and most importantly, free of fear.

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A multigenerational tale, Shari Vester's Degrees of Courage follows the lives of four women over a span of seventy years, chronicling their personal hardships while illustrating the challenges of retaining one's cultural identity in an ever changing political landscape.

Like other readers, I was struck by the historic scope of Vester's work. Beginning in 1900, the novel's timeline covers WWI and the fall of the Austro-Hungarian Empire, an economic depression, WWII, the political upheaval caused by Hungary's conversion to Communist rule and concludes with an exodus migration to the United States. There is a lot of history within these pages and though it is essentially a character driven piece, I was particularly drawn to Vester's depiction of a country in an almost constant state of transition. 

That being said, Vester's cast of characters represented a particular challenge for me as a reader. Not being overly sentimental, I had trouble with the intensely personal themes of their experiences and found it difficult to remain engaged in their stories when the narrative shifted focus to their cultural history.  


A light, family-oriented fiction, Degrees of Courage is a poignant tale of feminine fortitude and endurance, notable for its emotional subject matter as well as its depiction of a lesser known European stage. Not the best choice for those looking for action-packed drama, but certainly appealing to those with a taste for more subtle storytelling. 

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She was alone with her secret, with only her blind faith to sustain her in the lonely wait ahead.
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Review at Bloggin’ ’bout Books
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Guest Post & Giveaway at HF Connection
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Review at So Many Books, So Little Time
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Review at Closed the Cover
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Guest Post & Giveaway at Bibliophilic Book Blog
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Review at Just One More Chapter
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Review & Giveaway at Words and Peace
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Review at From L.A. to LA
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Review at Silver’s Reviews
Review at Books in the Burbs

Sebastian's Way: The Pathfinder by George Steger

Rating: ★ ★ ★ ★ ☆
Read: January 10, 2014

In a dark age of unending war and violence, one young warrior opposes a mighty king to forge a new path to peace... During the savage Frankish-Saxon wars, the moving force of his age, Karl der Grosse, King Charlemagne, fights and rules like the pagan enemies he seeks to conquer. But in the long shadow of war and genocide, a spark of enlightenment grows, and the king turns to learned men to help him lead his empire to prosperity. One of these men is the unlikely young warrior Sebastian. Raised in an isolated fortress on the wild Saxon border, Sebastian balances his time in the training yard with hours teaching himself to read, seeking answers to the great mysteries of life during an age when such pastimes were scorned by fighting men. Sebastian’s unique combination of skills endears him to Charlemagne and to the ladies of the king’s court, though the only woman to hold his heart is forbidden to him. As the king determines to surround himself with men who can both fight and think beyond the fighting, Sebastian becomes one of the privileged few to hold the king’s ear. But the favor of the king does not come without a cost. As Charlemagne’s vassals grapple for power, there are some who will do anything to see Sebastian fall from grace, including his ruthless cousin Konrad, whose hatred and jealousy threaten to destroy everything Sebastian holds dear. And as Sebastian increasingly finds himself at odds with the king’s brutal methods of domination and vengeance, his ingrained sense of honor and integrity lead him to the edge of treason, perilously pitting himself against the most powerful man of his age. This fast-paced adventure story brings Charlemagne’s realm to life as the vicious Christian-pagan wars of the eighth century decide the fate of Europe. Filled with action, intrigue, and romance, Sebastian’s Way is a riveting and colorful recreation of the world of Europe’s greatest medieval monarch.

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Charlemagne in stained glass.
Image by Fab5669
"Quamvis enim melius sit benefacere quam nosse, prius tamen est nosse quam facere." 

When translated, it means right action is better than knowledge; but in order to do what is right, we must know what is right. A comment on strength and how it is both balanced and justified by wisdom, this intriguingly provocative idea is attributed to the legendary Charlemagne and, rather appropriately, serves as the central theme of George Steger's eighth century epic, Sebastian's Way. 

Looking back on the novel, I can honestly say I was surprised at how easy it was to get into. Being largely unfamiliar with the Frankish-Saxon wars, I was initially intimidated by the story's subject matter, but was pleasantly surprised at Steger's deft explanation of medieval politics and straightforward approach to the complex intricacies Middle Age warfare.

I was further impressed with the diversity of Steger's cast and how he used characters of various backgrounds to create a comprehensive portrait of medieval society. I expected a military fiction, but what I found was a well-rounded, action-packed period drama. 

A compelling and imaginative fiction, Sebastian's Way is a realistic, romantic, and engrossing tale of valor, morality, and honor. 

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"Who has told you that you may refuse to to fight for your king? How dare you send me such a message? I am your king. You have a command in my cavalry. If I say you will fight, you will fight"
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The Winter Siege by D.W. Bradbridge

Rating: ★ ★ ★ ★ 
Read: January 12, 2014

1643. The armies of King Charles I and Parliament clash in the streets and fields of England, threatening to tear the country apart, as winter closes in around the parliamentary stronghold of Nantwich. The royalists have pillaged the town before, and now, they are returning. But even with weeks to prepare before the Civil War is once more at its gates, that doesn’t mean the people of Nantwich are safe. While the garrison of soldiers commanded by Colonel George Booth stand guard, the town’s residents wait, eyeing the outside world with unease, unaware that they face a deadly threat from within. Townspeople are being murdered – the red sashes of the royalists left on the bodies marking them as traitors to the parliamentary cause. When the first dead man is found, his skull caved in with a rock, fingers start being pointed, and old hatreds rise to the surface. It falls to Constable Daniel Cheswis to contain the bloodshed, deputising his friend, Alexander Clowes, to help him in his investigations, carried out with the eyes of both armies on his back. And they are not the only ones watching him. He is surrounded by enemies, and between preparing for the imminent battle, watching over his family, being reunited with his long-lost sweetheart, and trying, somehow, to stay in business, he barely has time to solve a murder. With few clues and the constant distraction of war, can Cheswis protect the people of Nantwich? And which among them need protecting? Whether they are old friends or troubled family, in these treacherous times, everyone’s a traitor, in war, law, or love. When the Winter Siege is through, who will be among the bodies?

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I have a love-hate relationship with historic fiction that focuses on the common man, but I seem to have lucked out D.W. Bradbridge's The Winter Siege. Meticulously detailed and wonderfully atmospheric, this convoluted murder mystery was simply impossible to put down.

Initially skeptical, I approached this piece as I do must historical whodunits. Simply put, I hope for the best and pray the period detail won’t be lost in an overly ambitious web of conspiracy and intrigue, which, now that I think on it, this is probably why I was so unprepared for the story within these pages.

Usually, I’m that reader who puts two and two together before the chapter five and finishes the book for the pure satisfaction of being right, but Bradbridge actually kept me guessing. I won’t spoil it for you, but I that fact that I was genuinely perplexed is really quite extraordinary. 

I was equally surprised by Bradbridge's protagonist, Daniel Cheswis. An established businessman, the reserved volunteer constable is an unwilling hero. Both sympathetic and relatable, he was an unexpectedly welcome departure from the glory hounds and tragic anti-heroes that typically populate this genre. 

Most astonishing, however, was Bradbridge’s description of Nantwich. Backdrops rarely jump out at me in this manner, but Bradbridge's dedicated research resulted in a remarkably authentic and insightful portrait of the city, its inhabitants and the rhythms that characterized daily life during this particularly tumultuous period of English history. Treated as a character in and of itself, the city literally comes to life over the course of the narrative, jumping from page with a personality of its own.

A weightier historical, The Winter Siege isn’t something I’d recommend to the casual reader, but it is without doubt one of the most cleverly convincing pieces I had fortune to come across.  

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"Then do you duty, Daniel, " said Ann. " But do not linger. It's time this nightmare was brought to an end - for all of us."
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Saturday, January 11, 2014

Veil of Time by Claire R. McDougall

Rating: ★ ★  ☆ ☆
Obtained from: Netgalley
Read: January 11, 2014

A compelling tale of two Scotlands—one modern, one ancient—and the woman who parts the veil between them. The medication that treats Maggie’s seizures leaves her in a haze, but it can’t dull her grief at losing her daughter to the same condition. With her marriage dissolved and her son away at school, Maggie retreats to a cottage below the ruins of Dunadd, once the royal seat of Scotland. But is it fantasy or reality when she awakens in a bustling village within the massive walls of eighth-century Dunadd? In a time and place so strange yet somehow familiar, Maggie is drawn to the striking, somber Fergus, brother of the king and father of Illa, who bears a keen resemblance to Maggie’s late daughter. With each dreamlike journey to the past, Maggie grows closer to Fergus and embraces the possibility of staying in this Dunadd. But with present-day demands calling her back, can Maggie leave behind the Scottish prince who dubs her mo chridhe, my heart?

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I had high hopes for Claire R. McDougall’s Veil of Time, but admit the reality failed to meet my expectations. Try as I might, I couldn’t get into the story and ultimately found the background information far more interesting than Maggie’s implausible romance with an eighth century Celtic warrior.  


Please excuse my impertinence, but I didn’t recognize one iota of chemistry within these pages. Maggie and Fergus go through the motions rightly enough, but that is as far as McDougall takes it. Where was the intensity? The raw emotion? The genuine cosmic connection? The plot is entirely dependent on this affair, but the lack of authenticity undermined the credibility of their relationship and by default, that of the larger story. 

Maggie’s epilepsy put an interesting twist on her ability to jump through time, but I felt the inconstant nature of her travels and McDougall’s failure to adequately explain the intricacies of these episodes detrimental to the integrity of the narrative. I understand her seizures and the medications she takes to control them are the catalyst that make her journeys possible, but ideally, I would have liked the author to have exerted more effort toward explaining the mechanics of Maggie’s transcendence of the space-time continuum.

These disappointments aside, I was drawn to McDougall’s portrayal of life in Dunadd. Her unsentimental recreation of the attitudes, beliefs and social structure of the Iron Age settlement are wonderfully researched and fascinatingly detailed. I also appreciated how she utilized this setting to explore the history of witch-hunting as well as the anthropology of Celtic paganism and early Christianity. 

Now I know everyone wants to know how Veil of Time compares to Outlander, but as I’ve not read the latter, I cannot make the token comparison. I do, however, think it interesting that the author herself implies her confidence in the manuscript was jump started by Gabaldon’s popularity. 

“I already had another book placed with my agent, though he had had no luck in selling it. I kept Veil of Time in my drawer, because I didn’t want him to stop plugging the first novel. After a while, I heard that a film version of Diana Gabaldon’s Outlander was in the offing (which turned out not to be true!), so I thought I had better get Veil of Time out. Time travel seems to be a topic of great popular interest, and my agent was able to sell it relatively quickly”

Overly drawn-out and painfully slow, I can’t say I particularly enjoyed the time I spent with this piece and in all honesty, I’d have difficulty recommending it to anyone but those with a vested interest in ancient Celtic culture. The books incorporates some great subject matter, but the story itself didn’t appeal to me. 

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I have had dreams before in the aftermath of seizures: I have argued points of theology with Mary Queen of Scots, who wasn’t the blockhead history has made her out to be. I have strolled along the beaches of Saint Helena with Napoleon insisting to me that he was being poisoned. But nothing has struck quite so close to home as seeing Dunadd in this way, with goats tethered and children running barefoot, with great waves of drumming and singing, and at the back of it all, a low murmuring like a didgeridoo.
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